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Tuesday, 23 May 2017

The tree climb

This is the story of my life at Golden Bay. Well it is part of it. I was walking up a track with my cousins.  My uncle shouted over the wind, “Let's stop on this cliff for a photo!”. The cliff was a steep drop down and pretty tall. It was like being in an airplane. The cars were tiny. We all went to the edge of the cliff and took the picture. And then we went on our way. It was a nice afternoon, until we stopped for another picture, but this time it was on a tree. We all climbed then I heard a cracking noise from my the branch I was standing on. My uncle was ready with the camera, “Aaannnddd,” he began.  But snap! I fell. It was like slow motion “Ahhhhhh!” I was gasping for air on the way down. Baaaam it was like torture, everything was blurry and weird. All I could do was stay on the ground stunned, and here was my brother saying “ Are you ok?” My thoughts were blurry and I could not speak for about 5 minutes. When I could, the pain started to settle in. After that I went back home, with a lesson made.

I was learning to use punctuation and my bright sparks book. It went will but my punctuation was ok and I used lots of words out of my bright sparks book to make it more interesting. My next steps is to make my punctuation so people can not correct my punctuation.

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